Saturday, April 11, 2015

Joseph Janzen's Touching Hands


a powerful man,
may not think of old or needy women as sane,
must face the inner struggles against Jackson,
that's something we say to a haired pen.
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a body that is slim and cohen,
placing an order on such a gentleman,
after he has gone through emotional argument,
he decides to let the tide rise and flood the den.
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there is small seagull sitting near,
there is young kids wandering by,
there is sailing ships harboring in,
there is loving couples swimming high.
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things have gone unnoticed, from time to time,
the one who is drowned speaks up for a crime,
no way to make everything the way it is,
time may sink those regrets when the Lord preaches.
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sad outcomes,
bad summary,
no way out,
here to shout!

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12 comments:

  1. Such a full circle post... thank you.

    Jeremy [Retro]
    AtoZ Challenge Co-Host [2015]

    There's no earthly way of knowing.
    Which direction we are going!

    HOLLYWOOD NUTS!
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  2. Religious messages tend to rekindle awareness. Very much so Roessel!

    Hank

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  3. Religious messages tend to rekindle awareness. Very much so Roessel!

    Hank

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  4. This was very visual for me. Especially towards the end, I felt under water. Thanks so much for visiting my blog and commenting. Nice to find you on the A to Z. There are a few other blogs I've been to who are doing poetry and I'm loving it! Lisa, A to Z Challenge co-host, @ www.lisabuiecollard.com

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  5. Seagulls, ships, kids - I can see the combination.

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  6. I liked the rhythm of your poetry. It made me sad.

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  7. amazing weight on a case,
    time comes and go,
    mood changes.
    god bless.

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